Wednesday, April 21, 2010

NPM 21


At the Mall

I fingered salt
crystals in pretzel
cheese cup residue

and whistled Dixie
while drinking water
from a paper cup.
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3 comments:

  1. CrysApril 21, 2010 at 2:35 PM

    This is probably one of my fav poems that youve written :)

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  2. ChoppyrocksApril 21, 2010 at 2:38 PM

    Is that because your name is in it ;-)

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  3. CrysApril 21, 2010 at 8:05 PM

    Damn!... I thought my comment was only 'secretly' narcissistic. Haha. I just like the mixture of simplicity and style. Duno.

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